Essay Revision

Directions:  Use the following links to revise your essay.  You must apply at least three new "elements" to your revised essay.  Do not revise an element you have already mastered.  For example, if you already have a good introduction, do not choose to revise your introduction.  On the other hand, if you do not have any figurative language, add figurative language.

Elements of an Essay

Description of Elements	Activity or Video	Consider this element if you scored:
Elaboration	Elaboration	1-3
Introductions	Introductions	1-6
Capitalization	Capitalization Practice	1-3
Transitions	Transitions	1-3
Paragraphs	Paragraphs	1-3
Run-Ons	Run-On Practice	1-3
Conclusions	Conclusions	1-6
Sentence Variation	Sentence Variation	3-6
FRIES	FRIES	1-5
Figurative Language	Figurative Language Video	3-6
Mature Language	Mature Language	4-6
Semicolon	Semicolon	5-6

 

Sample Essays

2 Essay    3 Essay     4 Essay     5.5 Essay     6 Essay

FCAT Writing Rubric

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